How do you thnk this stroy is so far?

She was alright until she heard the gunshot. That’s when she flipped out. “Noah?” she screamed in a panicked tone. No answer. “Noah?” she screamed in a slightly higher octave. Ok now she was getting really freaked out. “Noah please answer me.” She said a little more scared than before. “Anna is that you?” “Oh Noah yes it’s me where are you?” Anna said. “Over here follow my voice.” Doing as she was told Anna followed his voice and finally got to him almost tripping over a tree root as she did so. “Oh Noah I thought I had lost you forever.” “I love you so much Anna.”